From 08b5fbe328b3b234d9ee76dd19ddb8598fca5125 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Micay <danielmicay@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 1 Jan 2021 22:56:14 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] clarify wording

---
 static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html b/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html
index cf442d17..61c6c296 100644
--- a/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html
+++ b/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html
@@ -217,9 +217,10 @@
                 the <code>TCP_NOTSENT_LOWAT</code> socket option to override it per-socket.</p>
 
                 <p>A reasonable choice for internet-based workloads concerned about latency and
-                particularly prioritization within TCP connections is 128kiB. To configure this,
-                set the following in <code>/etc/sysctl.d/local.conf</code> or another sysctl
-                configuration file and load it with <code>sysctl --system</code>:</p>
+                particularly prioritization within TCP connections but unwilling to sacrifice
+                throughput is 128kiB. To configure this, set the following in
+                <code>/etc/sysctl.d/local.conf</code> or another sysctl configuration file and
+                load it with <code>sysctl --system</code>:</p>
 
                 <pre>net.ipv4.tcp_notsent_lowat = 131072</pre>