From 2336f1a57ecc18d9c9c2c05080a0eb49836d8234 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Micay <daniel.micay@grapheneos.org>
Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2024 11:37:34 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] improve wording

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                     <p>Changes since the 2024072800 release:</p>
 
                     <ul>
-                        <li>add back our change to prevent app-based VPN implementations from leaking DNS requests when the VPN is down/connecting but without enforcement for VPN apps without DNS configured to avoid breaking compatibility in rare cases as our previous implementation did which resulted in it having to be reverted before it reached the Stable channel</li>
+                        <li>add back our change to prevent app-based VPN implementations from leaking DNS requests when the VPN is down/connecting but without enforcement for VPN apps without DNS configured to avoid breaking compatibility in rare cases (our previous implementation had to be reverted before it reached Stable)</li>
                         <li>kernel (6.6): update to latest GKI LTS branch revision</li>
                         <li>Camera: update to <a href="https://github.com/GrapheneOS/Camera/releases/tag/72">version 72</a></li>
                         <li>Vanadium: update to <a href="https://github.com/GrapheneOS/Vanadium/releases/tag/127.0.6533.84.0">version 127.0.6533.84.0</a></li>