From 439a8fca1f085a0368113f9525f1ec8df0599725 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Micay <danielmicay@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 23 Mar 2021 09:36:36 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] expand features page information

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         <main id="features">
             <h1><a href="#features">Features overview</a></h1>
 
-            <p>This is an overview of the current set of features differentiating GrapheneOS from
-            the Android Open Source Project (AOSP). This page does not currently cover any of our
-            historical features that are either not yet reimplemented or which became obsolete due
-            to improvements in AOSP. Each major release of AOSP brings substantial privacy and
-            security improvements, some of which have been based on our research and development
-            work.</p>
+            <p>GrapheneOS is a private and secure mobile operating system with great functionality
+            and usability. It starts from the strong baseline of the Android Open Source Project
+            and takes great care to avoid increasing attack surface or hurting the strong security
+            model. GrapheneOS makes substantial improvements to both privacy and security through
+            many carefully designed features built to function against real adversaries.</p>
 
-            <p>GrapheneOS is based on the Android 11 release of the Android Open Source Project
-            which provides a strong baseline for privacy and security. GrapheneOS takes great care
-            to preserve the baseline privacy and security, including taking full advantage of all
-            of the standard hardware features. The privacy and security features inherited from
-            AOSP and the hardware are not covered here. Documentation on that will be gradually
-            added elsewhere on our site.</p>
+            <p>GrapheneOS is focused on substance rather than branding and marketing. It doesn't
+            take the typical approach of piling on a bunch of insecure features depending on the
+            adversaries not knowing about them and regressing actual privacy/security. It's a very
+            technical project building privacy and security into the OS rather than including
+            assorted unhelpful frills or bundling subjective third party apps choices.</p>
+
+            <p>The project cares a lot about usability and app compatibility so those are taken
+            into account for all of our features. GrapheneOS is also hard at work on filling in
+            gaps from not bundling Google apps and services into the OS. We aren't against users
+            using Google services but it doesn't belong integrated into the OS in an invasive way.
+            GrapheneOS won't take the shortcut of simply bundling a very incomplete and poorly
+            secured third party reimplementation of Google services into the OS. That wouldn't
+            ever be something users could rely upon. It will also always be chasing a moving
+            target while offering poorer security than the real thing if the focus is on simply
+            getting things working without great care for doing it robustly and securely.</p>
+
+            <p>This page provides an overview of currently implemented features differentiating
+            GrapheneOS from the Android Open Source Project (AOSP). It doesn't document our many
+            historical features that are not no longer included for one reason or another. Many of
+            our features were implemented in AOSP, Linux, LLVM and other projects GrapheneOS is
+            based on so those aren't listed here despite us often having involvement in making the
+            implementations for those projects.</p>
 
             <nav id="table-of-contents">
                 <h2><a href="#table-of-contents">Table of contents</a></h2>