From 5ffff6dfc19fd74054ab587cab396f86fd27b16d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Micay <danielmicay@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 1 Jan 2021 23:07:59 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] another clarification

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 static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html | 7 ++++---
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diff --git a/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html b/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html
index 61c6c296..47791618 100644
--- a/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html
+++ b/static/articles/server-traffic-shaping.html
@@ -231,9 +231,10 @@
                 sure there's not a negative impact for the workload.</p>
 
                 <p>If you decide to use <code>tcp_notsent_lowat</code>, be aware that newer Linux
-                kernels (Linux 5.0+ with a further improvement for Linux 5.10+) substantially
-                reduce system calls / context switches by not triggering the application to
-                provide more data until over half the unsent byte buffer is empty.</p>
+                kernels (Linux 5.0+ with a further improvement for Linux 5.10+) are recommended to
+                substantially reduce system calls / context switches by not triggering the
+                application to provide more data until over half the unsent byte buffer is
+                empty.</p>
             </section>
 
             <section id="future">