From 97db44bf2a06cbf5af2390405ffd7203f64f0fef Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daniel Micay <danielmicay@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 17 Apr 2022 16:14:30 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] reword server information

---
 static/articles/grapheneos-servers.html | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/static/articles/grapheneos-servers.html b/static/articles/grapheneos-servers.html
index 22c78740..2204c3ab 100644
--- a/static/articles/grapheneos-servers.html
+++ b/static/articles/grapheneos-servers.html
@@ -187,9 +187,9 @@
             <section id="releases.grapheneos.org">
                 <h2><a href="#releases.grapheneos.org">GrapheneOS release servers</a></h2>
 
-                <p>These servers provide the static file servers for GrapheneOS releases and our
-                app repository. These are used by the releases page and web installer along with
-                the System Updater and Apps (app repository client) within the OS.</p>
+                <p>These are the static file servers for GrapheneOS releases and our app
+                repository. These are used by the releases page and web installer along with the
+                System Updater and Apps (app repository client) within the OS.</p>
 
                 <ul>
                     <li><a href="https://github.com/GrapheneOS/releases.grapheneos.org">Repository</a></li>
@@ -249,9 +249,10 @@
             <section id="grapheneos.network">
                 <h2><a href="#grapheneos.network">GrapheneOS network servers</a></h2>
 
-                <p>These servers provide the default servers used by GrapheneOS for connectivity
-                checks, secure network time, attestation key provisioning and Predicted Satellite
-                Data Service (PSDS).</p>
+                <p>These are the default servers used by GrapheneOS for connectivity checks,
+                secure network time, attestation key provisioning and Predicted Satellite Data
+                Service (PSDS). These either serve empty responses or provide reverse proxies to
+                other services.</p>
 
                 <ul>
                     <li><a href="https://github.com/GrapheneOS/grapheneos.network">Repository</a></li>